The commission idea (provided by the client) was to do something similar to : [link] , Of course my drawing is not nearly good at that one but at least I try
Anyways, I hope you all like it, and yeah, it would be better if it was "insert your favorite character here" and "I wish they were naked", "too bad there is no feet" and other stuff, but remember it's a commission!
This is a Fan art so the characters belongs to their respective owners.
Lets begin this lovely critique, by just starting off with how well this piece turned out very well as most of your art, but I digress. So the vision of the piece is well portrayed as Rainmaker and Rogue falling through the sky having a good ol jolly time. The originality Id say is very new and fresh, I mean how many pieces of art have you seen today of two awesome characters falling through the sky, not many so originality is here. I think by this being the second piece I have critique for you your technique is always good and never finding errors in your pieces, so as always flawless. The impact of this piece is going to be a serious one when they find the ground lol, but I digress. The impact on this piece makes it feel as if your above them falling with them and their attention is focused on you at multiple angles of view no matter where you look. Overall this piece is a fantastic one, has no flaws, full of originality even for a commission, technique is always good from you, and the impact can be very funny also to a serious note it has a good POV effect.
Great stuff as always! Both characters are spot-on, I like how you varied the poses, the expressions are lovely, and the background actually works really well and gives the whole picture a very pleasing effect. Also, the way Rogue's hair is being blown around her face is a fantastic detail!
I love to see Gen 13 art that depicts someone else than Fairchild or Grunge (those two are fan favorites, but there are three other guys in the team, you know!
And I love seeing Rogue! Even when her story is pretty tragic, she manages to be very light (get it?)
I love the cartoonesque style! I think it fit most to superheroes that the realistic style, and those two not only look atractive, but cute and cool!
Thanks a lot, I know almost nothing about Gen 13 characters, and I say "almost" because the only thing I know is because long time ago, I had the chance to buy the first two comics released, of course I don't have them anymore, they are lost forever ( I don't even know what happened to them ).
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